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Monday's child is ugly as hell,

Tuesday's child just tripped and fell,

Wednesday's child is a bright ray of sun,

Thursday's child is here for fun,

Friday's child is a total bitch,

Saturdays' child is a mooching witch,

Sunday's child may be nice and sweet
But she damn well hope we never meet...!
©2007-2010 ~Shadowz-Writer
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Monday's child is fair of face,
Tuesday's child is full of grace,
Wednesday's child is full of woe,
Thursday's child has far to go,
Friday's child is loving and giving,
Saturday's child works hard for a living,
But the child born on the sabbath day,
Is bonny and blythe, good and gay


I was born on Thursday ^^

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:icondomino-t:
Change the 3rd line. Either drop bright, or switch it so it is in front of ray. Everyone knows the sun is bright.
:icondomino-t:
and Sunday's child use just nice and sweet. You already used bright, not to mention it throws off the meter. Stumbly.
:iconshadowz-writer:
okay ^^.

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:iconyanni-must-die:
I too was born on Thursday! I absolutely love this...so clever! (and for the record, I have never favorited a piece of poetry or prose...)

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:iconshadowz-writer:
Wow! really! thank you so much!!! ^^

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A poet can survive everything but a misprint.
Oscar Wilde

Arguments are to be avoided: they are always vulgar and often convincing.
Oscar Wilde
:iconboatkicker:
I was born on either saturday or sunday i think....and my mom wanted a meatball sub.

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:iconyanni-must-die:
Yes, really! :hug:

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